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« on: April 22, 2012, 07:19:31 PM » |
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And it runs a little long, for which I apologize. At least I posted it early. Born to be down, I've learned all my lessons before now
Born to be down, I think you'll get used to it
And you just don't get it
You keep it copacetic
And you learn to accept it
You know it's so pathetic . . . |
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Mr. Happy
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It's a beautiful day; let's play two
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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2012, 08:30:46 PM » |
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Damn, StrosRays Dark Star. It was an understatement to say that was a bit long, but it was entertaining to say the least. I didn't realize that Milwaukee was that cheap, so I learned something about that hellhole.
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God is on the side with the heaviest artillery. Napoleon
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« Reply #2 on: April 22, 2012, 09:54:29 PM » |
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Outstanding piece.
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Ron Brand
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Smoke 'em inside.
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« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2012, 11:18:03 PM » |
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Truly fine work, sir. It has been a long, long time and I'm glad you're back in the saddle.
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I like her better when she walks away.
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« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 07:09:39 AM » |
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It's really good but it has a lot of letters, spaces, and punctuation, and stuff. I'm not finished, got to go to work.
Just for fun I Googled images for "Bud Selig Cocksucker," Jim Crane's picture showed up on the third row next to Bea Arthur. That douchey kooky sombrero wearing, big handlebar mustached, "Caballito" made the second row?!?!
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It doesn't pay to try, All the smart boys know why, It doesn't mean I didn't try, I just never know why.
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« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2012, 09:04:56 AM » |
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The Void is officially over.
Amazing as usual DS. I'm thrilled to not be the Previewer who follows you.
And I will never look at Tom Petty the same again.
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Don't think twice, it's alright.
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« Reply #6 on: April 23, 2012, 10:59:53 AM » |
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ok, so i have just agreed to DS's request to do a preview and to combine it with some serious writing. then i read this. oh, my.
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« Reply #7 on: April 23, 2012, 11:14:19 AM » |
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Awesome, thanks DS. Man I just love reading your stuff.
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VirtualBob
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« Reply #8 on: April 23, 2012, 01:45:12 PM » |
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Damn. I always wondered who that kid was.
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« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2012, 03:57:02 PM » |
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Dadgummit.
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It's my estimation that every man ever got a statue made of 'em was one kinda sombitch or another.
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GreatBagwellsBeard
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A small room at the front of the plane
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« Reply #10 on: April 24, 2012, 12:00:04 PM » |
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Breathtaking stuff. I found that my palms were sweating at one point.
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« Reply #11 on: April 24, 2012, 02:34:59 PM » |
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I'm not sure what to make of the fact that DS apparently now has to travel to Vidor for his scooch.
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« Reply #12 on: April 24, 2012, 05:50:03 PM » |
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I'm not sure what to make of the fact that DS apparently now has to travel to Vidor for his scooch.
I was mapping out the geography and came to that conclusion as well. I'm holding out hope for Rose City. |
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« Reply #13 on: April 25, 2012, 08:54:32 AM » |
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I was mapping out the geography and came to that conclusion as well. I'm holding out hope for Rose City.
I was thinking Lumberton. I knew a good girl from Lumberton once. A little thick in the britches, but sweet like pecan pie. |
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Drinking for two.
“I want to paint a mural of Houston for the kids, but I’m terrible at drawing swamp humidity"
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« Reply #14 on: April 25, 2012, 10:59:56 AM » |
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I was thinking Lumberton. I knew a good girl from Lumberton once. A little thick in the britches, but sweet like pecan pie.
Ah Lumberton. The town that actually knows how much wood a woodchuck chucks. But he wouldn't crossing the Mighty Neches to get back to the Westend Wandas coming from Lumberton. |
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"Holy shit, Mozart. Get me off this fucking thing."
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« Reply #15 on: April 25, 2012, 12:18:51 PM » |
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I was thinking Lumberton. I knew a good girl from Lumberton once. A little thick in the britches, but sweet like pecan pie.
Because she was covered with cream? |
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« Reply #16 on: April 25, 2012, 04:33:55 PM » |
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Ah Lumberton. The town that actually knows how much wood a woodchuck chucks.
But he wouldn't crossing the Mighty Neches to get back to the Westend Wandas coming from Lumberton.
Pine Island Bayou. |
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« Reply #17 on: April 26, 2012, 03:38:17 PM » |
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That was real good. I always liked Dwight Twilly.
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It doesn't pay to try, All the smart boys know why, It doesn't mean I didn't try, I just never know why.
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